Sentence Structure Problems and Correction (Adapted by teacher Jorge Maldonado from Writing Academic English-fourth edition by Alice Oshina and Ann Hogue-Pearson 2006) Sentence Fragments are incomplete sentences or parts of sentences   INCORRECT ...

    Choppy Sentences Problem Too many short simple sentences can make your writing appear unsophisticated and your ideas seem disconnected. This impression can also be caused by too many sentences in a row that begin with a simple subject. (Notice repeated subjects in choppy examples...